My window is open
And Roman fresh air
Is entering my room …
It is night, my cherished friend,
And I feel happy/strange
Or stranna, as you prefer.
A breeze of joy
And a scent of freedom
Are entering my window
And pervading my soul.
You will think, my dearest woman,
That I am an old professor
Who is willing to write poems
Like old-time people used to do.
But these words are not a poem.
This is just the way I write,
This is how I need to write
When my heart feels rich and full.
It is full of all the days
We have spent together,
It is full of all those ways,
and race and stranna manners.
It is full of your superb
Mongolian laughing face.
All you have presented,
All the things that mattered
And that I could understand
Of this vast, profound great land.
And what I could not comprehend
You have told me with your accent,
You have spoken with throat voice
To this stranger from Rimi …
I look out my window
And I see Roman people
Talking and walking,
Laughing and chatting.
There are couples, youths,
Strolling on a street,
A Roman street
With Colosseum behind.
You’re from an Asian region
With great majestic Volga
Slowly flowing,
So slowly flowing.
It flows so slow
That gave me such peace
The first time I came to admire
Its silver transparent waters.
Going back to imperial Moscow
I was puffing on a train
Without looking behind
Like in ancient fairy tales …
Now it’s late, the night is still.
I can hear only a few cats
Roman people gone to bed
And me having to go soon …
I say good night to you my friend,
I say ‘have peace’ to you my friend.
I want so much, really so much,
That your life be so happy.
Another English poem (so to say) describing a moment of intense remembrance. It is not a love remembrance, it is to be noted, plus I know that the Volga region is not in Asia but in Europe. The person remembered was though clearly Asiatic in her origin and Mongolian in her features, Russia being somewhat halfway between Europe and Asia.
(Image of Colosseum by stefano.vesco)



It is beautiful. Conjures up an image of a violin player playing on a boat at night…
@Ashish
Thanks man. I do not know the effect of a poem like this on English speaking people, but I loved to write it.
@Ashish
Violin player, playing on a boat by night ….a very nice image. I think you have good poetic (and literary) potentials. Continue with your experiments. Btw, I liked the description of your B’day on your blog. I think that blogging enhances and develops literary capabilities, among the rest. This is why I like it. In a more and more audio-visual world this is not bad.
Ciao
I don’t know about the poetic skills… in fact I don’t understand much poetry nor have I got much stomach for it. But yes, blogging is an excellent tool for honing skills because not only does it give you a platform to express your self, it also presents you with critics that point out the goodness and the flaws thus enlarging your knowledge base.
Didn’t they have such meetings of scholars in Rome [Greece?]? Rome does live in the internet!
@Ashish
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Which meetings are you referring to man? My brain is as flat as a billiard table at the moment, due to horrible intense heat (wish we had rainy season too now lol)… and a flat brain doesn’t perceive humour, which is witty and brainy
Well, poetic skills … I can perceive you have literary talent, I am not kidding. I am a lousy poet but after reading some George Byron (who writes poems that look like novels and in such a fluid and natural way) I felt the urge to write some verses in English, just for fun.
My opinion, in order to expand one’s skills, is one should start reading some poetry (not only songs lyrics, even if they are better than nothing) in whatever language you like (marathi, if you prefer, because mother tongue is always the best) on whatever topic you prefer in order to start with some appreciation which then leads to natural imitation and to the feeling (and urge) for poetry.
One gets the urge for dancing, for music etc. much in the same way. You told me you are a good dancer …. I think that every art is basically taught (and learnt) by example, while lessons on poetry or music or dance are instead only boring and do not teach much (well, sometimes they do).
What is beautiful of your age is this tremendous capability of learning, which gets less and less as age proceeds.
All my best wishes to the Geek Warrior & Wrestler

future Emperor of this world
(and many other worlds)
Beautiful prose
@Maryann
Thanks and ciao Maryann
If you refer to my, so to say, poem, well, I agree, it is more rhythmic prose rather than poetry
Which meetings are you referring to man?
I read somewhere that scholars used to meet once a month to discuss and present their literary creations to members who used to collectively critque them. I don’t remember much of it now, but yeah, could have been false as well.
Poetry to me is an alien life form, but I will try as much as I can.
marathi, if you prefer, because mother tongue is always the best
LOL. I’m the most non-marathi marathi person you will meet. People call me “Angrez chale gaye, isko chhod gaye”. [The English left, but left him].
I’ve been thinking of starting to learn the Guitar and the violin, but I need an instrument first… plus I have too much going on right now what with the rains and everything, but I might start soon. I have been wanting to learn the violin ever since I read Sherlock Holmes.
Thank you.
Best of luck to you too, Imperial Advisor of Diplomatic Affairs and Historical Matters [so I don't commit the mistakes of other rulers!
] Man of Roma!
@Maryann
PS
I loved the Dean Martin and Sinatra player on your blog. I have always adored them!!!
@Ashish
The English left, but left him….
Ah ah ah, you are really something! So the English left you… Ah ah ah ah ah.
Ok, being cosmopolitan can help in life. I can tell you, because I was a little bit like that too, and it helped me a lot. But your English is surely more fluent than mine, and I am 60 and you are only 19!!! Gods …..
Guitar and violin, great choice, and both string instruments, left hand doing a very similar job, so not that difficult learning them together (well, difficult, but passion can climb mountains, we say).
Historical matters are surely important for an Emperor
Ciao
thnkss
beatful photoss vaoaaww